Wednesday, 5 July 2017

The Legend of the Steepest Street in the World

The past few weeks my class has been writing our own legends. 
I enjoyed doing this because I got to be creative and write my own legend. My next step is to use other words so that I don't repeat the words I have already used.

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  1. Hi Brielle,
    I enjoyed your story about the steepest street. It was very well done and I read every single bit. Maybe next time you could add your own drawings to the slideshow.

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    1. Hi Eden!
      Thank you so much for your feedback it really made me think about how much more i could have creating my own images. It makes me feel motivated when you say you enjoyed my story.
      Thank you for checking out my blog!

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